I wanna see what she looks like!

does charlie like soda? just curious?

That was great even though it was sad! But hey maybe that's what you were aiming for! Great story once again and update soon!

great story

I love it

write more

show me what charlie looks like right away or i'll hurt you. do it fast too. ohh yea. AND ADD MORE i love it. bye loser

sara lowe,swayze,dillion

OMG

taht's so sad!

Update asap! i need to know what happens next, or else! lol

Thanx

Its a great start! Update soon!

Aw, so sad...

But I love this chapter! It's so cute! Is there going to be a pairing If there is one let us know!

This is wonderful! I can't wait to read more... I know you probably hear this already, but please please PLEASE update soon! lol. Great story.

Peace, love, and pixie stix,

Nash

Aw, it's a really cute start. I love it so far. Is there going to be a pairing? Cuz if there is, I can tell it's going to be with Darry. Or Soda. I love it, so update really soon. I have a friend who's middle name is Charlotte, and her last name is Woods. Hm...weird. But it's still cool. Update!

Luff,

Starr

hey i like ur story so far, seems interesting, keep it coming.

I like it, its a good start...

can't wait to read more :]

Update Soon!