okay still don't get the humor and wtf is going on basically

Sounds really great story but you could do few check ups on your story... Like few dots after a sentese and makin more clear who talks. Anyways, really great work. I would love to find out more about this!

Hope you don't mind me faving!

wow that is realy good more chapters more chapters

haha i like demyx too :)

You're such a dork ] Interesting story. Cloud is oh so awesome