let me guess about the itch on the back of arashi's neck...
a suppression seal maybe there are two people who could have done it and i think that orichimaru put it there

another very good story

GAH I SWEAR I NEED TO TOP READING FANFIC THAT ARE OVER 15 CHAPTERS! lol.

now that's out the way . nice fanfic an i find it pretty amazing you manage to do that man cross overs so well (kinda wish i had seen ever episode of teen titens sinces i dident know some of the characters you mention like terra till u mention the spy bit or the trigon till u mention ravens father lol) love how you gave naruto the jagon an dragon of the darkness flame that was an interesting touch kinda surprised you dident have him train under genki then again know her personality maybe that's a good thing.

over all i give your fanfic a 7/10 nice job .

I wish your stories could somehow be madereal. I've been thoroughly disapointed by the animes and uour wondeful fics are really helping. Love your stories!

I am going to finish reading this at a later time... it is kinda numbing my brain. I will finish reading it though, it is not bad I just feel a need for a fresh story line, so onto the next interesting one on your list for now!

So I didn't quite get what you meant about him using the male dragons... can you explain that? other than that... AWESOME!

Ok I am going to admit that I was really annoyed with this story at first... I mean at the start it is not nearly as good as your other ones that i have read so far... so I kinda mighta skipped a few chunks of the other chapters... but I can honestly say, that it is getting better and I fully expect it to go uphill from here... so I am gonna go read.

Dude... you are my hero. I love where the story is going not to dark a naruto but still not the carefree idiot. you are a Genius.

also would you be interested in makeing a Jak and Daxter X-Over with Naruto i would love to see how one would reacte to the others world.

Honestly I do not see a point in reading any of the battles in this story until the final one since you obviously are going to be backpedaling so hard it looks like a reverse Flying Thunder God Technique in regards to Naruto's abilities as a ninja. You've made him very powerful, so in order to give any of his enemies a fighting chance you have to pull some major retcon BS via flashbacks in order to weaken Naruto substantially for every single major fight he gets in so that the outcome is similar enough to canon thus giving you an easy plot outline to follow.

Scenarios like these are why I absolutely abhor the body switch and the shunshin techniques. Kishimoto should have called them plot device no jutsu numbers one and two.

If Haku can escape with a half-dead Zabuza with the Shunshin technique, why the hell can't two uninjured and powerful shinobi use shunshin to get the hell away from four missing nin IN THE MIDDLE OF THEIR OWN DAMNED VILLAGE? Not to mention Naruto's demonic version of the Flying Thunder God Technique. They could be long gone in an instant. Hell, he could probably find and bring the Sannin, his father, and Slade to the park faster than the missing nin could mold their chakra in order to perform a shunshin.

I've been holding my tongue about all the ridiculous things that have happened in this story since it's been finished for years now, but I don't understand how you can have Arashi casually execute random nobodies for talking trash yet get all feeble when it comes to the people who have tried (and will continue to try) to kill his son.

and dont forget you said as he gets used to them they increase by 10x each time.

I said omgwtfbbq when slade came out of the boy and said who he was.

You ball-less pussy. I don't understand why everyone has to keep with that promise not to maim Neji part but it needs to fucking end.

Considering how well you've been doing this is a MAJOR disappointment.

You weak willed little shit.

Hinata's still a pansy man. What the hell is going on there? Stop making her into such a goddamn wuss.