Once again. love it. You're brilliant at 1st person Wilson, in particular. Are you going to do a Forman chapter? It'd be interesting.
Loved the writing in the first chapter - 100% IC, and very insightful (I think I may have written that before *grimaces*)

Good! Keep going and thanks for the update!

Oh, I like this. It's IC and it's nicely written. Great job; I'd love to see you continue it. :D

I like the ironic tone in this chapter. Thanks for the update!

Nice idea. I'd like to see you go further with this!

Good start! Generally, I favor third person, but you do first person very well! Thanks!

Very interesting. Keep going.