 Floria Tosca 7/18/01 . chapter 1This poem is good at evoking moods, sensations, and emotions, but since I'm not super-familiar with Oracle, except her basic bio, (used to be Batgirl, crippled by the Joker, becomes computer genius, teams up with Black Canary in B.O.P.) I don't get all the metaphors and allusions to the comic (if there are that many). However, it works well as plain poetry. A good job overall. |