Well that was terrifying.

You're awesome! :)

Terrifying. Absolutely terrifying. Is there more to this?

Can you give me a link or some info on this N-d20 Demon Campaign Module?

Bwah... bwah... bwaha...
*twitchlet*

Yeah. I salute you on your writing. That was really quite well done.

O.O Oh my GOSH. What the HECK is going ON?!?!?! And where the heck were Naruto, Gaara, Tsunade, Ero-sennin and Snake-face?! I mean, if the enemy is a demon army, fight back with your own demons (or super-powered ninjas)! Out of those five, I personally believe that at least 3 are demon-vessels. Naruto-Kyuubi...Gaara-Shikaku...Orochimaru-Hachibi...and Jiraiya and Tsunade might as well be, with their big-a$$ Toads and Slugs.

Neat! Stories like this which combines horror and suspense with action are my favorites. A monster wearing a mask? Is there any Bleach ih here? By the way where do you find the Naruto d-20 Demon Campaign module?

Good intro. THough When are you going to update foxhound. YOu left me hanging. THough i look forword to this story as well. Keep It up

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Dramil

im not entirely sure there will be a follow up to this prelude...cause as stated by kraken ( whose writing works rock ) this is an intro for a naruto d20 piece ( which i think is something like a DnD game? i have very limited understanding about DnD/d20 games other than more or less how their played )

does this mean there will be no follow up to this story? cause it has me intrigued...btw i follow your LJ..so erm if u happen to read this..could u post a short clarification if this will be continued at all ( be it another story as this one is already classified as complete ) ? thanks ( though u dunt really have to post anything cause you dun really owe us anything )

nice, although i i was wondering if there is any Bleach in this

Hmm... interesting, I must say.

I'm glad to see you don the author's mantle once again. I had feared you would remain silent after Foxhound.

Before I carry on with the review, I must introduce myself. The name's Loki Nishizaki, with Loki being my first name. Feel free to adress me as you wish. No need to introduce yourself, I know who you are.

When it comes to grammar and syntax, you do well enough that we can skip the subject entirely and pass on to more important things. All in all, this prelude warns me of great things to come, but I have a few questions.

The fact that the Sound village exists tells me that the story probably begins after the start of the series. I wonder, does it happen before or after Sasuke's defection? I can't help but wonder where the jinchuuriki are when all of this takes place. Most particularly, the star of the show: Naruto.

The fact that a bijuu exited the portal... does that mean that its targets are its brethren? Or does it simply wish to conquer and feed on the flesh of humans? Is it even the leader?

Oh well, I can wait for answers. I eagerly await the next installment. Keep up the good work.