I really liked this. I like how it was set at a specific time in the anime - made it feel more real.
Also, the "bluenette" part made me laugh

I just finished viewing the show yesterday, and I gotta say I also developed a soft spot for Miyuki. It is a shame, really, that there aren't more Miyuki/Shizuma fics out there. Not to mention, I also love their chibi selves. Amazing job!

OMG! This was so cute, you don't even know! ^o^ I love ShizumaXMiyuki ffs, and I'm so glad I got the chance to read this one!

I loved your fic. :3

Woww.. I love this fic! It's such a well-written narrative! And I love that it's a MiyukiXShizuma!!

An excellent character piece, very well written, & IMO, very much in-character too. Great stuff. ^_^

Damn.. this was fantastic..and slightly sappy, but sappy's good :D Yay for the Miyuki love, go away Nagisa, ShizumaxMiyuki OTP!

I loved this story! It was so well-written. I'm just getting into Strawberry Panic and your story is helping me to love it even more. I already liked Miyuki, now I REALLY like her, and Shizuma, well, who couldn't love her?

Well, who doesn't adore Miyuki? :3
I loved this fic and definitely look forward to the next. :D
*Fav's*

Wow. This was incredibly well-written and I love your descriptiveness. Thank you so much for sharing it with the rest of us.

Why not indeed. ^^ This made me squeal. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes (a welcome rarity), and I liked the way you wrote it. And you say you're working on another? Happy day.
~Naolin