Damn. I don't even like the 411 pairing even in the slightest and I'm in love with this story. o_O

dsukfusfhjsgdf.

That was sexy.
Very nicely put with the subtle symbolism between the elements, make this story all the more beautiful.
:]

>>[FL]

Cool...
Nice Ending!

Axel + Fruit = YUM

Beautifully written...Love it.

hey archy. :D

I loved this. Really. xD
You made me remember how
much I love Axel's eyes. ♥

Hope to talk to you soon. (:

E› mitsu.

GUH!! i love your work so much. ♥

yuyu.

Damn I like your writing. You always have the perfect endings.

O.O Dude, excellent description in the last parts. I especially liked the line "It’s unusual for him to be so careful; he’s fire, he burns, he destroys. He’s never tentative." That was some pretty spiffy characterization. I admire your skills...

NO FAN GIRL IS SAFE FROM AXEL'S FIRE! XD

~The Soup

GUH. ♥ your writing is amazing as ever :D

You should write one of these drabbles on Pluots...Now thats something Axel would eat...that and a mango...and a red pepper...oops...Went off to food so fast,...This was hot...burning my brain hot...j/k...I really wish I could fav this...*sniff* Stupid fav limit...Check ya later!

K to the H to the 2...

j/k...

KH2

i like the whole neck=necktarine thing you have going on. very juicy :)

erm...it was good. i just wish there was a lemon. >.>

Oh god yes. *adds to favorites*

Nothing really good about this story. No original thoughts or much effort seem to have gone into it. It neglected to keep my interest.

Good job. I like the nectarine. But now I'm hungry.
gr...gotta go get food...
xo (and cookies)