Very good. The thoughts of a warrior waiting to defend her homeland against invasion. Thoughts that have been repeated century after century.

i like the story.i think it needs more involvement with conor though.i look forward to future chapters in this story

very beautifully written, great work!

Lovely, such a haunting melancholy between the lines. Very well written indeed. I loved it!

Very nice and concise piece! :o) Looks like you captured all the characters well... is there going to be a continuation of this story? Looks like you've set it up nicely for a next part. Hope you will continue!