 Yaoi-fangirl 2/11/12 . chapter 7 OMG! Du är svensk!o.o jag kommer såå stalka dig tills du skriver klart denXD (nah, just kidding:p) |
 Yaoi-fangirl 2/11/12 . chapter 7 I LOVE YOUR FANFIC! So funny and smexyXD the angst part was good too! please update soon!(puppy eyes) i cant wait for the next chappie. |
 thelastunicorn 10/5/11 . chapter 7i love this story. it is really good. i can't wait for the next chapters to come out next. |
 narutogirl103 9/18/11 . chapter 7aww cute |
 MoonToy 9/12/10 . chapter 7Lol that was great this is doo going on my favorites list! That went from tragic to halarious! That was great awsome job ! Update sooooooonnnnnnn. ! * |
 kill4blood 12/6/09 . chapter 7aw kawii! |
 Narsuke 11/5/09 . chapter 7Awe how cute the entire rookie 9 plus Lee, Neji, and Tenten saw them all sexed up! lmao!
I am shocked Sakura or Ino didn't try to kill Naruto for getting Sasuke's first kiss and virginity!
Please update I wanna know how the village reacts! |
 Sparky-hime 10/6/09 . chapter 7*squeals* OMG SO CUTE! XD
Ha, the fangirls... that was so funny, and the lemon was good too, of course. Poor Sasuke, and Sakura's doomed... Sasuke should set his fangirls on her! I won't alert this, because to me that's a pretty good ending, if slightly incomplete. Good luck with the rest though, and I hope you do end up updating this, it'd be a shame to leave this masterpiece incomplete.
To point out what I like best, the way you manipulated the dialogue (used speech, sorry, I overcomplicate things... *sweatdrops*) was impressive, and the sound effects - Kakashi and Kiba laughing - also helped to build the mood. If the characters are laughing, we laugh along with them! I think... sorry, I wouldn't know.
Bye! |
 Sparky-hime 10/5/09 . chapter 4Um, I really shouldn't, too many cookies in one day will make me fatter than I already am...
This chapter, again, is really good, and I especially like the way you portray Sakura, not because it's nice but because it's a good contrast to Sasuke and Naruto in character. Also, the way that you managed to bring in so many characters without over-complicating it is really impressive.
*munches cookie*
I should really save it for later, but I'm hungry even though I just had lunch! DX |
 Sparky-hime 10/5/09 . chapter 2*is cookie obsessed*
HAVE TO REVEIW!
Sorry, slight freaky moment there... the story's really good, going at a good pace and well written.
*likes this chapter*
Hope Naruto's okay, but I'm not too worried, not too many people kill off the main character straight away. That would be boring...
Well done! |
 666blackcat666 9/12/09 . chapter 7aw thats so KAWII ! i loved it ! cant wait for more ! |
 Natusky 6/10/09 . chapter 7oh you said that you'll give the conti faster, didn't you? So, where is it? buah
Please conti, I love the fic and you know I read it in the last hours, and I have watched the until the last chapters of the anime and manga that have been released and I don't care about that things this'll survive to all the things that could happened is just so good! so please conti I wanna read! I beg you conti! |
 hanakisa 5/31/09 . chapter 7i love this please update soon and have sasukes fangirls become sasunaru fangirls! *evil laugh* |
 angst-is-my-life 4/17/09 . chapter 7Good fan fiction. Well, Sakura isn't a bitch like that in the actual Naruto Shippuden(just the Shippuden. Also, suicidal people don't recover just like that. At least I didn't, and all the people in the suicidal self help group which just made me even more suicidal. It took me a LONG time to get back to being remotely normal... |
 Torad 1/18/09 . chapter 7I know I'd drool on 'em! Update pleaase! |