I, for one, loved the run-on sentences - because that's how we think. I love the description of his silver-haloed eyes - you painted Sephiroth so well, especially through the eyes of someone (Aeris) who strikes me as having a streak of hero-worship in her soul. Beautiful, and fun at the end when all she can babble is "Flower?"

I think I have a new author to add to my list of favorites. Thank you for sharing your talents. :)

a really cute fic...I enjoyed reading it.

Excellent imagery and tightly focused within dreamy need. I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it. You did the characters well and kept them in their personalities.

I really like the description here. You do a good job depicting the gorgeousness that is Sephiroth.

Can't help but notice you Technically disobeyed Jenova. Well, good for you. The world needs more of that. ;-)

Anyway, I thought this was a lovely rendition of a meeting between them.

This is SO good. I'm still listening to the tango :-P and it just like... Fit. Wow. Your writing is excellent. I could actually tolerate Aeris in this. Impressive.

I loved the part about the eyes.

So, so good.

Wow, I just love this. Especially the ending. The Aeris/Sepiroth pairing is something I've always found interesting. It's a very difficult pairing to write for, but you portrayed them wonderfully. Great job.

Aw.
Made me smile like an idiot at the end.

THis is a very emotion-invoking peice, i love it.

Thats it! aww.

That was really funny, and yet cute.

Aww, that was really sweet. :) First person narratives are usually tough to do (at least, for me), which is why I usually skip over stories in the first person. This, however, was fantastic! Hurrah! Keep up the great work!

Aw. That was cute. Aeris and Sephiroth has been my favorite from the start, and you do them great justice. :3 I have a lot of 'aww' moments with this fandom. I love the descriptions of...well, just about everything. Good job with your mental/physical thesaurus/dictionary. :)

Constructive criticsm? There were way too many run-on sentences. Seperate your sentences up a bit; don't keep going on and on with 'and this', 'and that'. It helps your style a lot, trust me. Great job with everything else!