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| Holy'Shrimp 2008-05-20 ch 1,  | abuseI knew from the beginning that it was about Horo and Pirika! Names are given early, but well x) Once again, that's the kind of stuff you can see in everyday life, and you painted this very well. The fact that children want to help but don't know how, the way Horohoro is sad but mad at them really sounds realistic ( I have some experience with parents' arguments and departure, so yeah x] ). That was really, really touching, and it's worth the time you spent to write it! |
| TOOL.2 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseOh, so pretty! and sad! I had tears streaming down my face. I like how it was in Pirika's POV, cuase she's not an often used character. I like how you described the lesser characters as "big kids with rocks". so childish and innocent and SAD! |
| momijikk 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseah! it's so sad! I can't stop crying! oh, poor pirika and horo! at least they have eachother, like siblings do... well, what else do you expect from he lovely nirah? a sad story, and it's really good. -momiji |
| tictac-chan 2006-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse>.< u made me CRY! it's so touching.. and sad... very very well written! thx for the awesome one-shot.. so bittersweet... so awesome |
| Jaded Autumn 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseKya! So cute! I love little Horo and Pirika --squeezes them-- oh, so so so so so cute! It was sad too D= but the cuteness overwhelmed the sadness for me. THat was the best, I always wanted to write a songfic for that song! Never got around to it though, hm. All well, that was better than what I would ahve thought up! 'Cause it was so cute! I loved it! --Autumn |
| Mikeala-and-Whitney 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseI loved it... Yet I don't know what to say... *Trows a randome stuffed animal at you* Why do almost all you're stories make me cry? |
| Sakira-chan 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOh! That's so sad and cute at the same time... Hmm, bittersweet... |
| DragonStorm85 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG. I made a bad choice in reading this at school cuz I'm on the verge of crying now. -Must be strong!- That was beautiful. The time and dedication you spent on this shows through the writing and emotions. Yet another reason for me to love you! |
| cemetarydemon 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusewaah! this is so good! i was so close to crying! i bet i cant talk right now because my throat is all contristricted like when you cry! that was so well done! i loved it! |
| thoughtless dreamer 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI love that song so much; this fic made me cry. ...It was really good. |
| punkymonkey79 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abusenice! well written but holy crap havent thought about that song in a long time :P |
| Dracianna 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuse*standing ovation* THat was such an awesome fic! So much emotion... And perfect choice of song! I love the way you're so graphic that you can actually see what's going on. Great job! Keep it up! :3 |
| jenny-R 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad...I really loved it.The way you described their feelings was amazing!Great job! |
| angel hakusho 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseOmg, i actually cried reading this story. :[ |
| Setsumi-san 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. I wanted to give Horohoro a hug after reading this story. He's such a good brother. My favorite parts were the lines about the parents as big kids with rocks. Awesome work! |