the story is great im loving it but you need to put a disclaimer on for shinko and yuki. They were created by Tamora Pierce even if they ont really match the characters.

was she supposed to be like that, with green eyes and dark hair because you wanted it like that? because Holly has Hazel eyes and unburn hair.

nice chappie.

very interesting!

EK!


I WANT A JAGUAR!

oh yeah, it's bad 'Jad Princess' got arrested. but still, at least she has a rockin' car!

I'm sensing a AU...

lol. So far, very funny. Jailbreak, huh? I cannot wait. -laughs manically-

Good job! This is a great story! It's very well written and you seem to have given it lots of thought. update soon!

I like this story :D
But it will AJ, right ? Not AH ?
Keep writing :)

Good Story i liked the idea. I likied your descriptions keep writing