I loved it! What are the odds of those two meeting again, eh?

This was so awesome! I really did love it. It left just enough to be explained and just the right style of writing...keep up the fantastic work!

Oh this was great! There was some great throw backs to the movie especially when she was asking about his job. It's not everyday that you would sit next to an assassination manager on a bus, especailly not after having met him before. :)

Ultra-cool.

Nice patient development, letting the scene play out. You really get the sense of how tedious those long bus rides are.

"He stands up and suddenly, his thin, medium frame looks too large"

As it would, under those circumstances... ;)

Love it!

wow! Really good! And I caught that Dresden Dolls reference.

Good work. You let the plot unfold slowly. It's only later that we discover things about Jackson.
I liked it.