Good job!

plz keep writing email me if you do thank you oh and that was realy good

Whoa, this is awesome! Write another like this and I'd read it! ^^

Having read your story status's on your profile, I must leave another review to tell you I am doing the sequelsequelsquel dance. Or another separate piece.

-I- certainly liked it. I hold firm to the opinion that Ban has the potential be be quite evil within him. It makes sense that Akabane would know exactly how to exploit that (and would explain Ban's limited struggle against it). I mean, why bother exerting effort on your part when you can make your victim busy fighting themselves?

I still don't quite get the discrepancy between the first and second parts, probably because sometimes subtlety completely deserts me. But I must ask exactly how Ban came to have injuries that severe.

Anyway, I throughly enjoyed this. :D

omg... i thought i would hate this pairing... but you made it good 8D damn... now i'm hooked D:

Perfect, just perfect, like I've always wanted it to be. Doumo arigatou gozaimashita) It's bold but I want to ask - would you please write some more of A/B pairing?^-^

Um...Err...Amrita, are you sure you were in your right senses when you wrote this? Jackal kissing Ban? And Ban loving it and moaning? They both derive pleasure from the fight and the thrill of the hunt, but making Ban gay is going a too far, don't you think?

I can't believe you wrote such a story.

All I hope is that Chapter 1 is some kind of dream, an effect of the Evil Eye or something, and where is Ginji ?

I didn't think Ban would succumb to Jackal like that !

Whatever it is, but unfortunately, I am looking forward to the next chapter.

KrystalMage! XD
Hah hah...this story is actually awesome...and yeah I can imagine Rava's reaction to it.
/me imagines and starts giggling her head off

AWSOME! I luve this pairing but theres not a lot T-T. Write more and I'll luv you even more

Can't beleive that you would actually hurt Ban, or give him over to Akabane

this story was really good, please keep writing. i love this pairing.^_^

Its an .. interesting story and your storytelling seems to get amazingly better each time around. :) Can't wait for more stories from you. :D

Nice! I'm a fan of this pairing so naturally I'm biased, but this looks like a promising start and I hope you'll continue. :)