does that mean both of them are LESBIANS?!?!?!?!

Hotaru loves mikan too? wow...

update soon

WOW... mikan's crush.. nice nice

Yes! finally someone did a Hotaru/Mikan fic, or at least one that i could find. i think you did a great job of showing what they thought of each and truthfully it makes alot more sense than Mikan and Natsume to me. ur writng is great and i hope you keep up this and ur other stories.

At last, some Mikan/Hotaru. It's difficult enough to find, surprisingly. This story seems a nice summary of their feelings. Though I really don't see Natsume/Mikan at all, except in a possible friendship sense.

Hey hey whats gonna happen next! I just can't wait I wanna know i'm hooked!!:)

I KNOW. There are no fics about this couple when she obviously has a crush on Hotaru. I mean dreaming about kissing her, asking if when they went to that shopping place if it was date, and when Hotaru left and she was upset about the letter her grandfather talked to her about how he too wrote letters to girls he had an unrequited love for. And yet after her obviously having a crush on hotaru nobody has written a fic about it. I know I checked so hopefully you will update this. Preferably soon.

It's about time! Very fitting title.

I particularly enjoyed Mikan's drabble. You make her more intelligent and a lot more wiser about things than she lets on. She isn't the blundering whiny girl here, which is a nice change.

I hope you write more about these two.