Aw... That was X-tremely CUTE!

I think this was a great first ff! Although it could have been a little longer, and maybe a little less rushed, it was great! Great job of expressing their feelings that that!

CUTE! That fit's really good and portrays them really well. What a great way to show their real feelings in a story. Keep writing; your doing great! Wow! I love it!

AW!

It was very nice for your first story trust me a lot of ppl flamed me on mine!

Short, yet nice. Very good first story.

Keep the good writing.

This one was pretty terrible. It was rushed, and kind of forced out, and a lame ending, but what else is new in this section.

I'm going light, since it's your first one, but if you write a second one, try to suck less and make it longer. If you do happen to write another one, and it's mediocre (as bad as this one), don't even bother posting it.

cute and sweet. i agree it could have been a little longer, but overall it was really good for a first JN fanfic.

aaw ^-^ so cute! i luv this! its 1 of the better 1s i've read!

this could have been better if it had been a long multi chapter story were Jimmy seeks her forgivness or something similar. while I like the idea it neaded more substance.