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| SlothKeeper 2008-07-18 ch 11,  | abusehaha. now how to tell Leo? I liked it. |
| mysterywonder 2008-07-15 ch 11, | abuseGreat story. I hope you update soon. :) |
| running in circles 2008-07-11 ch 5, | abuseit was the "lost a fight with a nuclear power plant" line that really made me fall off the chair laughing. :D |
| ashleymariehalliwell 2008-07-08 ch 11, anon. | abusethis is really good so far. I thought it was supposed to be finished but watever. just plz update soon cuz i love this story thanx. |
| fuzzykit 2008-07-03 ch 11, anon. | abuseI loved it |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-07-02 ch 11, | abuse*chants* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! loved the fic, need a continuation please! |
| spunkygirl517 2008-06-29 ch 11, | abuseoh please write more i love this story so much especially chris oh yeah =) |
| FT 2008-06-28 ch 11, anon. | abuseHaha, loved the first encounter between Chris and Phoebe, very original Also loved your portrayal of Paige (esp. the comment, "I'm sick and you have to be nice to me", I'm going to have to use that sometime XD ). I tend to check profiles after reading; ...ignore the bad comments because I would really love to see a sequel, and I'm sure many of your readers would agree with me. Btw, is it just me or does the correlation between the negative review and the reviewer's pen name strike you as humorous? =P Just curious, do you have a beta? or just someone to look out for typos? Seriously though, how many negative reviews do you have- and how many positive ones do you have? ~Good luck to your muse, etc. |
| crazyDFFgang 2008-06-28 ch 11, | abuseNice chapter... Through I'm a little disappointed that you skipped the most important part - the talk between Chris and Piper. Still it's sweet. (Chrissy.W.x, crazyDFFgang-member) |
| angel74 2008-06-27 ch 11, | abuseGreat story. I'm glad you finished it. Too bad we won't see Leo's reaction to it all. Thanks for sharing. |
| moony391 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abuseOoh, very nice! |
| SeeNoEvilHearNoEvilSpeakNoE... 2008-06-26 ch 10, | abuseholy **az. did u just call me a **! yea your ending sucked. the story is supposed to be about chris being blue. that plot didn't end. you just efing changed yourmind and made it a chris revealation fic. gaygaygaygay. no offense to anyone out there. but seriously don't say my reviews are ** when i say the story was good it just ended badly. |
| laily7420 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abusei like your story but i prefer it if chris suffers a bit...seems like piper accepts chris as his son so soon...but never mind me.keep on writing.luv the storyline;) |
| Za Webmaster Authoress 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abuseHAHAHA! I love that last bit, :D |
| Witty-Kate 2008-06-26 ch 11, | abusesequal? please? :( |