it was cheese but i really liked it!

love it alot
its awesome & great
thansk for this great story
great love babykool12

cute

Hi, I found it so sweet, make me remember my grandmother stories. Thank you, for that.
Cynthia.

This was a very beautiful story and sweet...gives you a different outlook on the stars :)

Aw that's the cutest.

I liked it. it was really sweet, maybe it was kinda cheesy but i like it, i like fluff. great job with this story! :D

That one-shot was so awsome! It was really cool but maybe because this is my first story I've read ^.^' ; but still, it was a nice story to read about Edward and his mom.

Aww you are right it is cheesy but it is very sweet. I liked it a lot.

Once again... GREAT! A bit cheesy when his mother's talking, but its still a good dialouge to me :D

Thats sweet! It reminds me of something my grandmother told me about love and the stars!

Good job :)

That was a great one-shot. I loved the flashback, getting to see some of Elizabeth Masen. That was really nice. great job!

That's so adorable! *cooes at baby Bella and huggles Eddie* They're so cute together!

this is good!

I have a question. Did you come up with this? Or did you hear it from somewhere? I ask this because I'm Mexican and grew up around Mexican folklore and we have something similar as to why stars exist. But I must say that I'm impressed. I do love this version of the myth. Your way with words makes you feel Edwards loneliness but also his childlike wonder. So i applaud you... keep up the good work