Reviews for The BAU's New Cancer

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xoli 2007-09-01 ch 14, anon.	abuseAnd I was going to rant about the plotlines and thinning story... But, seriously, there's potential there! I'll forgive everything for just two reasons: 1) “That conversation I just had with myself proves it. I’m a psychotic.” He blinked. “SWEET!” (Your character has a life of his own) and 2)The extra short and extra fast funny flashes of him escaping hospital and coming home to Reid's way to go LOL!
xoli 2007-09-01 ch 7, anon.	abuseer... nop, not so great... It's a little bit incoherent by itself and there are inconsistencies between this and the last chapter. I still like your characterisation though
xoli 2007-09-01 ch 4, anon.	abuseNow, seriously... a month? deep undercover or whatever for this assignment? come on... I bet not even the FBI would pay for that. Anyway, I love the 'teen' situations you are creating. They are really humorous, but not too Criminal Minds like, don't you think?
-Hidden-Wolves- 2007-07-12 ch 14,	abuseOk the story was...good.. It wasn;t the best. I liked the case but unlike CM there was a lot of personal stuff going on, if it had just been the case then i think it would have been good. I like Gerard. He was cool, but I still do not like the whole gay thing...Or the facted that Reid changed in the end, sure I like him to be more confident but he changed a little to much... also I found some parts confuseing, like I wasn;t sure who was talking, and somethings just seemed so random and I could not get why some one said it or what it really was about. I also have to get one thing straight, clear my nearly none existing name, I have nothing against gay people, or bisexuals. I have an aunt, or really two, who are gay, nad my BEST friend is bisexaul, it just doesn't work with reid, I am sorry, if that is the way that you see it then fine. Another thing is a thought that the characters were a little out of character... It seems that this story was written for the first sesson, adn not the most resent one, and I don;t know the first one that well, so that might be why, but I felt like they all acted to different...I could be wrong though so don;t hold it against me, I don;t need more bad stuff stuck to me...
-Hidden-Wolves- 2007-07-11 ch 12,	abuseOk i just have to saw one thing that is getting on my nerves, I just read the 11th chapter and I cna not belieze that you are having reid fall in love with anyother MAN...It might be what you like but I can not take it! Reid is not like that...It migth cahnge for the better or for the worse. but I am not to sure that I wnat to continue to read...I wnat to know what happens to brendan nad the killer, but I do not want to read about a gay Reid... I just don't know...
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 14,	abuseYAY! I'm a sucker for a happy ending! great story
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 10,	abusepoor gerard!! I can only imagine what he must be going through...him and Morgan. i'm off to finish the story..."see" you at the end
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 5,	abusegreat job with ending...keeps the reader in suspense...but not me!! Why? well, because the stories done so i'm off to see what happens...please don't be mad but i'll probably wait a few chapters before I review again!
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 4,	abuseIt's official: I'm in LOVE with gerard! Oh...I have a feeling he's going to be /is a "good" influence on Spencer!
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 3,	abuseI like Morgan's reaction to Garcia's question "suddenly wished that the team hadn’t flown her out" I do feel bad for him though...poor guy!
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 2,	abuseloved the ending!!
supergirl3684 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseI love Gerard!! Oh my, I'm a Morgaon fan BUT I love that Gerard annoy's him so much...it's so funny!
AkeeeAkeee 2007-02-04 ch 1,	abuseHow much do I love you? You put little things from everything that I loved in this fic, yay! I'm gonn finish this tomorrow, when I'm not half-asleep at the computer! Geread=the sex. Really. He's awesome. And oh yeah, you have my everlasting love and devotion because you love HIM.
Hu 2006-12-14 ch 14, anon.	abuseI adore your character Gerard. He's wonderfully eccentric and very emotional, while at the same time very vulnerable. While I'm not a huge fan of slash, I think you did it with taste in this story: Gerard and Spencer are so cute together! I hope to see more stories w/ Gerard. :)
Charlie Winchester 2006-12-12 ch 14,	abuseLOL. Your story makes me giggle. I don't really like slash but your story was fantastic enough that I read it anyway. Bravo job. -Charlie

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