Wow. This is dark. I like the unusual twist on the pairing, and the fact that Revan still believes that she does what she does for the sake of the Republic. Does she realize she has fallen, I wonder? Nice job.

I really liked this, expecially you telling from the point of view of Revan "protecting" the Republic. think it could have been longer though, a bit more flushed out. I was left with a lot of questions like, "So she saved Dustil on Koriiban, or they never found him?" and "Did Carth die on the Rakata Planet or later?" All in all it's a great piece and very powerful.