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SkieStrife
2006-12-26 . chapter 1
I love this story so much, though were is leading is kind of obscure... I wish you'll continue it, i would be such a pity to drop it just like that
hikari uteda
2006-11-21 . chapter 5
I've just read all your chappies today! they're great! keep up the good work and don't forget to update! lol!
Bright Lotus
2006-11-09 . chapter 5
Lotus Times...I'm touched. Great Chap. Didn't know how you'd work Sephiroth into the characters, but this works. I thought Zac would be a better Laguna and Sephiroth a better Seifer, but we can't have Zac being Cloud's father now can we?

I'm so happy you continue to update!
Bree
2006-11-08 . chapter 5
Wow! Another chapter :D Yay! I'm so excited to see where this story is going.
Beeria
2006-11-07 . chapter 5
Oh and the drama starts! lol. Sephy and Ilfana...yay!!
Bright Lotus
2006-10-05 . chapter 4
Yay! An update finally! I swear, this fic is wonderful! You write really well. The sarcastic humor is (as always) the best part, I think. Keep it going!
Beeria
2006-10-05 . chapter 4
Well I thought it was a good update. I was waiting for it. Hope you update soon. I've not played FFVI in ages!
SkieStrife
2006-09-30 . chapter 3
I love it! just a question though, is Zack the bay guy in this story? I hope not.
Maiden Cheza
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
Great story! Keep up the good work!
Draggyish
2006-09-08 . chapter 3
Oh wow. Love the memories leaking through. The character personalities are, imo, right on par. A great blend of 7 and 8's personalities ^_^
Mr. Ite
2006-09-08 . chapter 1
I really like this chapter. I've read the others, but thought I would comment on this one. Brilliant writing, very good. This chapter alone could be a one shot, and it works even better as a prelude to a fantastic crossover. Keep it coming. Favorited
Angelicxox
2006-09-08 . chapter 3
awesome awesome awesome awesome...that all i have to say for this chapter was the awesomeness! (and i guess right?!? whoo hoo!! that is a surprise for once lolol)

great interpreation of everything, i love this story and i cant wait for you to update it again!!
Bright Lotus
2006-09-08 . chapter 3
Wow, you're good. You're REAL good. This has got to be one of the best conceived and written fics I've read. I mean, you really know how to discribe and to set the mood. Aside from a few spelling mistakes, this is an awsome fic.

Can't wait for the next one!
Beeria
2006-09-08 . chapter 3
I love this fic! Update soon
Beeria
2006-09-08 . chapter 2
oh interesting stuff. Well, I'm off to read next chapter
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