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gabs
2009-04-30 . chapter 8
Aw, how I missed this lovely little fic of yours^^ Here I was, dying of ShinoHana depravation, lol
Jyukai Koudan
2009-04-28 . chapter 7
That's weird. I left a pretty long review and all it showed was the sentence that I loved the chapter (which I did!) Oh well.
So here's the review again and hopefully it will work now.

Chapter 8:
About the first scene, in the tree, I thought that part was really sweet! It's really nice how Shino noticed Hana being tired and how he took care for her. And poor Shino, smelling like dirt. xD I'm glad Hana doesn't perceive it that way. Interesting though, how Inuzuka's can get information just by the smell.

The second part was amazing too. It makes me wonder what Hana is up too.
I like how they embraced each other at the end of the chapter... twice :)

I like the interaction with his parents too! I love Hotaru's characterization! I like the advice she gave her son. Go for it Shino!

Oh, and even though I forgot to review chapter 7 earlier, I loved that chapter too!
CRdragonPyro
2009-04-27 . chapter 8
Hey! Glad to see you back, I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next. You do good work. Peace.
Jyukai Koudan
2009-04-27 . chapter 8
I totally loved this chapter!
KibaCanLickMe
2009-04-27 . chapter 8
Yay, updates are always appreciated. I hope the new chapter comes out soon, I'm anxious to see what Hana is doing.
anime-is-dumb
2009-04-26 . chapter 8
Well, now I can't wait to see what happens in 3 weeks. This chapter was just as amazing as all the others. Can't wait to see the 9th chapter!
sophia666
2009-04-26 . chapter 8
great chapter. I'm glad Shino had a talk with Hana... I wonder if Itachi has anything to with her involvement with ANBU, or if Hana has any idea of Shino's feelings for her. and I loved his talk with his mother, she's very spunky, and she gave him good advice. great writing. please update soon.
Ikasury
2009-04-25 . chapter 8
^.^ yee!! *glomps* its great to see this up again!! and the bloody complicated drama is killing me!! x.x what the bloody 'ell is that girl doing... with handcuffs... and ANBU... o.O;; this doesn't sound that good... plus the whole exhaustion thing... Hana better be scheming some crazy junk involving getting Shino, cause honestly SHE is the one making this rather obvious, and he's being the idiot... then again, those in love are absolute idiots, and blind, in soo-oo-oo-oo many ways -.-

they should have made out in the tree... *shifty-eyes*

yea...

^.^ and Shino's mom bloody rocks!! go super-intel woman!!

i hope to see more soon...

Till next *Salute-waves* Sayounara, Avon!!
-Ikasury
wirbil
2009-03-05 . chapter 4
This is uber awesome! I hope you come back and update soon. I adore a good ShinoxHana. The comment about doggy-dissaproval was hilarious! c: Happy Writing!
puppydoglove678
2009-03-03 . chapter 1
This story is alwsome. You have a nac for stories. No matter how long it is. I don't care. I read it like 10 times by now.
anime-is-dumb
2009-01-09 . chapter 7
Wow, this really is an amazing 'unexpected' pairing fic that just *works*.

The next chapter is very eagerly anticipated.
KibaCanLickMe
2008-12-12 . chapter 7
Is Toshi Kiba and Hana's brother? I thought you said he had blonde hair and green eyes, way back in chapter two or so... anyway, congratulations on your graduation!
Donna della Penna
2008-12-11 . chapter 7
LOVED this chapter, I have to say, and I can't wait to see Shino completely lose it in front of the elders. ;) Congrats on the B.S., too!
rnc4
2008-12-11 . chapter 7
Congradulations!
puppywau
2008-12-11 . chapter 7
Wee, Update!!
Interesting turn of things, I'll say^^ Can't wait too see what'll happens!!

Oh, and congrats btw =3
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