Crap.

Hey, I know this was written years ago but it's still pretty awesome. If ur reading this I want you to know ur awesome!

Loved this story, I am sorry it took so long to find it.

Well, it took me a few days, but I finally finished reading this story. I enjoyed it immensely, and most of the chapters left me hanging on the edge of my seat. It was loaded with grammatical errors, but the story itself mostly makes up for that. I give it 4 stars.

I just finished reading your novel Killer Instinct: The Story. Having been a fan of the original game for many years I was expecting a fanzopzapulas fic, and I was happy to see that you stuck true to the story telling in the game itself! It was written at a level that can be easily read and understood by the fan base, not too complicated, but at least challenging. I was generally impressed by a few of the plot twists. I really enjoyed Jago's nuanced monologue on greed ("So much death, so much destruction, so much suffering") from chapter 14. It is rare that you can find this kind of prose in a story like this.

Overall I think the author should definitely keep this up as I'm sure he will continue to improve in the future. Two and a half stars

Aww too bad you aren't doing a sequal. Otherwise I would read it. A very good story indeed, something I say to all good author's stories. Its good when I'm sad about the last chapter and ending of the story. It means I enjoyed it and iwhsed there was still more to come.

The only I didn't like was Glacious death. Epiaclly when he was killed by Cinder! Grrr. But I'm not mad at you. He's just one of my fave Killer Instinct chars.

Yeah so this is by far the best KI story out of the rest. You did good.

Well, I'm not much of a reviews. I just wanted to say the I really really enjoyed reading your fanfic. I loved Killer Instinct and this fanfic was a pretty great read. Thank you.

Awesome story. I'd take this over any Hollywood adaptation anyday!

I had just got into reading this story, since I'm a fan of the game itself. You got good concepts with all the characters. I also like how you present Jago and his relationship with Orchid. This story is realy interesting. Hope to see more from you.

Peace

edboy

why no sequel (. but good story )

i liked it but did not i liked it because of glacious did not cause glacious lost i mean wtf man!

Phenominal story! Kudos on a terrific story!

Great story. Always liked the game and I could never get the damn soundtrack outta my head.

Great ending of a great story! Funny too. Great job man!

Congrats on finally finishing this story. The end was rather funny. XD This was the perfect example of a novel based on a game. I'm sad that this story had to end, but it was worth my entire time. The chapters had a good length, good detail, good character development, etc. This story kept me on the edge of my seat with all of the fights. It was like I could picture it all happening. It still is a shame that Rare never gave us more to the story, the relation to the characters, and others, but I'd say you gave us the perfect example of it. Ah, well, maybe Rare will make a KI for XBOX360..shame I don't have one.

Anyways, congrats on a fine story. I can safely give this story a 5 out of 5. Awesome job!

Key19