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| soccergirlmich 2007-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was really good...You asked if more would be good and yes more would be a good thing. Thanx |
| Kate Bridges 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseoh. my. god. that was really sad. but powerful. the part where he asked danny to watch over sydney almost made me cry. maybe you could write more, it might be a good story to continue. any ideas? good job on this! love, kate |
| SG-Fan 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseWow... powerful. Great job. If you add more, I'll read it. |
| vaughnfan 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. So if you suggest there's more, does that mean he didn't shoot himself? And also if there is more, is there the slightest chance that Sydney survived the plunge and did something similar to what her mother did, faking her own death? By all means, if there's more - please show us! I kinda want to find out! It's brilliantly written though mate, top effort |
| Muddy Poodle 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWell I would love more, but how? They both kinda...died. lol Romeo and Juliet style almost. You wrote their pain and angst very well...aw, it's so sad!! lol |