 Rebeldynasty 1/9/12 . chapter 1Whoa, this is an oldie.
I had to bite down on my knuckles to keep from laughing too loud, since I didn't want to wake my daughter. This was one of the most hilarious one-shots I've ever come across. XD |
 Blitz-Krazi-1 10/8/11 . chapter 1This was GREAT! hahahaha Skywarp and Soundwave are my two favourite Decepticons ever! haha I wish more was written about them like this xD
xoxo
Krazi-1 |
 Southamerican Eggplant 6/13/11 . chapter 1This, my friend, is absolutely hilarious. I was in stitches by the end of the page. Ingenious, Skywarp! Nothing! How amazing that his walnut-sized processor ever thought of that...
Over all, this is a well-written and very amusing story. It's very clear, and a quick, fun read. I think that if you cut down on a few adjectives, it would help out a lot.
Once again, wonderful story. 5/5! ;) |
 LunaeShark 9/8/10 . chapter 1They painted him PINK? LOL, poor Skywarp.
Though he probably deserved it, if he managed to elicit an emotional outburst from Soundwave, which is probably as impossible as getting one from Prowl. XD |
 LolliDictator 7/15/10 . chapter 1LOLOLOLOLOOOOOOL. I freaking adored this, really...did you do a prequel or sequel to this, btb? Such a promising story :'3 well done, really. 3 |
 Prowlsgirl 4/2/10 . chapter 1*laughs hysterically* Oh man. I love Soundwave. He's so...Soundwave. I love the way you wrote feelings into him because some authors don't do that. I mean, he's a normal mech, just reserved and, in my opinion, shy. It's nice to see a devious side to the stotic mech most people see. |
 Artemis1000 11/13/09 . chapter 1Hilarious! I really love that the ultimate prank is not pranking Soundwave at all. Poor paranoid Soundwave! |
 Eliza Acheron 9/25/09 . chapter 1 Hahaha- Great story! Got me laughing- you write well, keep up the good work!
"You must be this tall to terrorize Earth" gold.
: ) |
 Dragon260 6/1/09 . chapter 1Oh, I LOVE this! Hilarious! |
 Cassidy 5/3/08 . chapter 1 Awesome! |
 Taipan Kiryu 3/6/08 . chapter 1This was hilarious!
The best things come for those who know how to be patient, and Skywarp made a remarkable demonstration of the art of being subtle.
He has never been portrayed as the smartest Decepticon despite there was no evidence in the show that would sustain so. I applaud the way you wrote him, a real tactician and studious of his victim to be.
As for the later, oh my… poor Soundwave. He got attacked precisely where it hurts the most. His emotionless and reserved behavior being shattered like that, so much for his safety zone.
The payback was priceless! Warp learned his lesson too, though the fact of actually having Soundwave reacted so emotionally surely compensated his new pink self.
This was beautiful to read. Besides the great story and development of the characters, you did a great job in descriptions and you are so skilled in taking your readers to powerful and believable mental images.
It was great to see how such a wonderful writer as yourself moves so smoothly in the lands of humor too. Thanks for this story :o) |
 Atalan 3/3/08 . chapter 1Oh man, Soundwave snapping SO MUCH LOVE. I adore Skywarp the prankster. :D For some reason one of my favourite lines in here, though, is the random one about Megatron and Starscream having a civilised conversation in the control room. :D |
 StarSwoop 2/21/08 . chapter 1Ohh! The comedies are the best! More pranks please-esp against Screamer. |
 eeyop1428 1/1/08 . chapter 1that was priceless at the end lol. finally, skywarp gets his comeuppance from no other than soundwave hehehe. just goes to show: never mess with soundwave. ever.
liked that last sentence that "he almost relished the thought". its good to know that soundwave can feel such emotion as "relish"ing something, especially if it's by his own doing. |
 Ruthnim 12/22/07 . chapter 1I'm imagining pink colored Skywarp.:) |