The rumors ARE true! Lmfao. It was great =]

that was to much lol i can't belive they got away with that lol good story

WOW! That has to be the greatest Reno prank ever. :)

*^^ Gawd, you're right Ari...
...I really have mistakes and other stuff.But this was actually my first NORMAL fan fiction.Sorry...

Good grief that was the most horrifically written story I've read for a long time. It doesn't flow at all, it's not organised and any reader who isn't directly linked to your mind has no clue about what's going on. Read your own work twice or three times minimum before you post it up, you'll notice little mistakes like Reno finishing his coffee twice at the begining. These inconsistancies make reading your story difficult at best.

The whole thing with the photo made no sense whatsoever and Tseng's characterisation is not consistent at all and Elena doesn't even appear to have a personality while you have Rude saying nothing or very little but with no action. Rude may say nothing but he convays a lot in glances and shrugs that you've failed to illustrate for the reader.

Good idea but think it through.

LMAO! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! yay!

omg. I had to cover my mouth and bite my lip to keep from loling and appearing insane to my fellow family members. >.> That was really funny. I'd love a continuation!

Very funny. xD
Um. O.O
This is my first review and I'm not sure what to write...
But it is very funny and please please please please please continue it! *tries not to sound like a n00b with all the 'please's* Erm, that's all! ^^
Very good.