Reviews for Two Gentlemen Of Tortuga

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a reviewer 2008-06-17 ch 97, anon.	abuseMy wild guess is that it will NOT to smoothly. patiently waiting for an update I hope your family is doing better, and that all is going well.
Alvilda 2008-06-04 ch 97,	abuseI liked your other two stories better, the Bessie series are the best in my opinion. It's a bit more 'normal'. :) But still, your stories are some of the best there are on fanfiction. I think you need alot more Elizabeth in this story, loved her!
Morte Rouge 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseI would be honored to shoulder the beta-ing of this eloquent story. Thank you for requesting me!
MrsKiLupin-Darcy 2008-05-13 ch 97,	abuseNo! You did it again! "Will it go smoothly?" Update as soon as possible, and I hope things with your parents work out for the best.
1BabyBoy 2008-05-13 ch 97,	abuseLove the byplay between Mab and Jack - they sound as if they've been married for some time! Kind of nice that Mab has the children round her. She and Jack can play with them but give them back too!
icebluehost 2008-04-24 ch 96,	abuseHahahaha go Elizabeth! That's the way to show Will. I have to agree with Owen. I can't wait to see their expressions when they see Jack and Mab really in love.
1BabyBoy 2008-04-24 ch 96,	abuseElizabeth is turning into such a termagent! Or is Will just becoming lily-livered since his marriage? "Let's humour the poor woman until the baby comes!" Glad Puerto Rico is in sight. Hope they make it to the wedding without mishap. The rum that's sure to flow there will no doubt cause mischief enough!
Smithy 2008-04-24 ch 96, anon.	abuseI am not self-possessed. I just love a good romance, and Will and Elizabeth definitely qualify, and I was so right, there is a little Turner on the way {or in some cases, Turners}. Way to prove that Will is definitely not a eunich.
MrsKiLupin-Darcy 2008-04-24 ch 96, anon.	abuseI didn't feel like logging in, sorry. Great chapter, even though there's an annoying little-cliffhanger at the end. I really can't wait till Will and Elizabeth get to the wedding!! Post the next chapter as soon as possible!
MrsKiLupin-Darcy 2008-04-14 ch 95,	abuseYay! The weddings next! And don't make any cliff-hangers on my account! I'm perfectly fine without them, I assure you! ^_^ The proof of it is that I can't wait till the next chapter even though there really isn't a cliff-hanger in this chapter. (Although I'm extremely excited for the wedding, I've gotta say!)
1BabyBoy 2008-04-14 ch 95,	abuseHeck of an introduction for Patrick's poor children to life on the ship - their new mistress so drunk she's passed out! I keep putting our modern-day moral construct on the story, so my heart bleeds for the children. Of course, during that day and age, they probably had seen much worse. After all, they have weathered the death of their mother. Hope Mab makes up for it, and that Percy becomes fast friends with both Dinah and Wyn.
SparrowsVixon 2008-04-14 ch 95,	abuseThat was really funny...I love a drunk Jack...sometimes X)
Smithy 2008-04-14 ch 95, anon.	abusePlease update, I want to see this before the week is out. Wonder who is going to be at that wedding. I have a very strange feeling about that.
1BabyBoy 2008-04-13 ch 94,	abuseOnce again, I love how you titillate your readers with Jack and Mab about to get it on but then you leave us at the bunk with our imaginations to guide us where they will! Wow! A new character in this Patrick fellow? Partying at the Bride before they get married?! What does Jack do for an encore in San Juan? or will they just enjoy a quiet (relatively) honeymoon?
MrsKiLupin-Darcy 2008-04-11 ch 94,	abuseGreat chapter! And there's no cliff-hanger comments! I can't wait 'till the next chapter! [Only a three-sentence (well, now four) review, with as many exclamation points, how weird!]

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