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| xoVanilla-Bean 2008-07-09 ch 3, | abuseAH! OH GOODNESS!! I loved this story! :DD And all of its yuffiexvincentness because they are just the radness. I swam and bounced and ate the fluffiness like marshmallows! XD |
| llivla 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuse("Too dry," Cloud said absently. "The flowers are wilting. Aeris dislikes this weather. Both of the girls had grown to take no notice of Cloud's talking of women long dead as if they were still there. It was better not to ask.) *head desk* I love your Cloud. He's better than canon McEmoPants!/ConfusedlySad!Cloud because he's still messed up in the head and obsessed with dead people but at least he's cool and goofy and corny about it, on top of being socially awkward and a;foeijsl;dfa. ("Grief lasts forever." He used his claw to balance them, closing his own eyes as images freely danced along his eyelids. "But eventually you feel it less, and less…") Your observations are flippant and yet perfect; this is a sucky piece I picked but really if I cut and pasted everything the whole fic and all three chapters would be in here. At first I refused to read ("Yuffie? Vincent? *ERROR. PLEASE REINSTALL UNIVERSE*) but then I was recced the ever fabulous 'Tastes Like Green' and I'm slowly eating through all of your stuff. I used to think the only ship I would ever approve of for my Yuffie-muffin's happiness would be if she could clone herself, but you have completely changed my mind with her and Vampire Man's retardedly cute relationships where Yuffie kinda unretards him but not really because the retardedness is endearing to her while her ADD lingers on it. ("You're trying to die while you're still living," Yuffie continued to rage. "And it's not worth it! Don't be her, Vincent. If she'd loved you enough, she wouldn't have taken her own li - " With a snarling scream, Chaos wings broke out his back, his face contorting in pain as the changes went through his body. The Chaos demon was too impatient to wait; he grabbed Yuffie, ready to squeeze her little body's bones to dust, ready to spill her blood -) Thank you so much for keeping Vincent scary. He would scare the crap out of me and I'd probably pee my pants. I definitely like your later fics better but this one, though a bit fast and rocky, tied up so wonderfully and there's just so many delicious pieces I can't help but fall in love with it like everything else. Your Tifa kicks ass too. And Barret. ;aifwdwfawe I love Barret. And Cait Sith. People always forget about him. And don't get me started on your Cid. He's every cranky piece of love I got a hard on for. |
| Kiva 2008-04-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseKawii this is soo cute I love it |
| Illa Scriptor 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abuse:) A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. |
| Illa Scriptor 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuse"Do you want breakfast either? I can always shove my fist down your throat!" "Hah! Watch me tremble!" "Reeve was so on drugs when he made you, cat." "Same to your mamma!" PAHAHA. But in the end, this chapter was sad. :( |
| Illa Scriptor 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAw. So cute. I love how you write the interaction between Yuffie and Vinnie! |
| BruHaeven 2008-02-22 ch 3, | abuseoh gawd, your writing style and characterizations are so amazing that they just make me wanna burn everything I've ever written from sheer embarrassment.. anyhoo loved, loved, LOVED this! the whole thing, all your portrayals of Yuff and Vin...EVERYTHING XD |
| K.A.G 2007-12-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis story was grea, it had enough plot to keep me satisfied this kind of writing is just right for a person to read. I could easily say that it was the most developed and in depth story I have ever read on I especially loved the ending please continue writing for my sake. :3 |
| My-Sanity-Went-B00m- 2007-11-24 ch 3, | abuseI liked it! I really did. Yuffie getting over death leaves so much room to start a Yuffentine. Very well done. |
| oblivion's pen 2007-09-23 ch 3, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this! It's so angsty...but cute and fluffy. Great job writing this! .oblivion's pen |
| a.girl.named.jake 2007-06-05 ch 3, | abuseGreat fic! I loved it! |
| Shirox 2007-03-03 ch 3, | abuseI love your fics! They are always so damn good! :3 |
| Maria 2007-02-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseI really liked this story. Some parts actually made me shed a couple of tears... I love when a story can do that to me. It means it's very good. :D |
| Nectaris 2006-12-06 ch 3, | abuseStories this excellently must be reviewed, even if they are finished. So HOORAY for Vincent learning, and the happy happy happy ending! Yippee! Hooray! |
| Kimmae 2006-10-23 ch 3, | abuseNo, not the end, dammit! Crap. I'm not gonna find another one. |