 Mrs.GingerHinkley 2009-07-31 . chapter 1Great job! You really captured a four year old witch's dialouge very well. Dora's outing with Sirius was rather amusing. I especially like how you explained Andromeda's reaction; very real and believable. |
 random.illusionz 2009-06-16 . chapter 1haha mini dora tonks >.< so cute
loved it ;) |
 Jasminny 2009-06-03 . chapter 1haha. such a funny ending to a sirius [hehe] one shot. i like reading this one
shot over and over especially because of these lines: "She just tossed it out so
easily, so naturally. It was like...like..." "Like you used to?" so perfect and right.
and i love sirius using dora to pick up girls. funny:] |
 madbrad 2008-12-19 . chapter 1An amusing first two-thirds, but the
> "Like you used to?"
brought me up short. Great ending.
(And much more enjoyable than an article on financial planning. :-)) |
 Matt Quinn 2008-12-05 . chapter 1I liked Sirius using Nymphadora to meet women, although I was under the impression they never actually met before Sirius was imprisoned.
I liked the comment about the neighbor's cat. |
 moonyroxs 2008-11-29 . chapter 1 cute... now i wanna read your other stories too |
 Winni3 2008-11-26 . chapter 1Aww! That was so cute! Especially the part where Dora was talking about how she helped Sirius 'pick up' that girl, lol. Aw |
 xSugaryTearsx 2008-11-15 . chapter 1that was amazing!! little dore is so cute x3 |
 LostAndAwaiting 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Cute story with an interesting theme. I liked it very much. You catch the voices of the characters very well. |
 Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-10-10 . chapter 1Aw, this was adorably cute and funny, and yet it managed to be serious at the same time. You've mixed childish charm, wily pick-up techniques, and hurtful colloquialisms all into a one-shot. Excellent, and definitely a favorite. |
 HallowedInk 2008-07-03 . chapter 1"And then… we picked up girls."
"You did what?"
"Dora, um, Mummy's not interested…"
"No Sweetie, Mummy is very interested to hear about that."
Aww, I loved this. So sweet! And I liked the ending, the way Andromeda remembers and there's a serious scene, but then you difuse the tension with a joke at the end. So well written.
Well done!
-Halo |
 pinecone.girl 2008-04-17 . chapter 1:) absolutly wonderful |
 unique.normality 2008-04-07 . chapter 1*shakes head*
lol
Sirius
XP |
 AmazingBouncingFerret445 2008-03-28 . chapter 1this is a really nicely done fic. i loved it! and i like how you chose to end it on a humorous note. good job ;D |
 Lilianne-Rachelle 2008-03-02 . chapter 1HAHAHA the middle part was halarious
where sirius was using dora to pick up girls lololol xD |