Great job! You really captured a four year old witch's dialouge very well. Dora's outing with Sirius was rather amusing. I especially like how you explained Andromeda's reaction; very real and believable.

haha mini dora tonks >.< so cute
loved it ;)

haha. such a funny ending to a sirius [hehe] one shot. i like reading this one
shot over and over especially because of these lines: "She just tossed it out so
easily, so naturally. It was like...like..." "Like you used to?" so perfect and right.
and i love sirius using dora to pick up girls. funny:]

An amusing first two-thirds, but the

> "Like you used to?"

brought me up short. Great ending.

(And much more enjoyable than an article on financial planning. :-))

I liked Sirius using Nymphadora to meet women, although I was under the impression they never actually met before Sirius was imprisoned.

I liked the comment about the neighbor's cat.

cute... now i wanna read your other stories too

Aww! That was so cute! Especially the part where Dora was talking about how she helped Sirius 'pick up' that girl, lol. Aw

that was amazing!! little dore is so cute x3

Cute story with an interesting theme. I liked it very much. You catch the voices of the characters very well.

Aw, this was adorably cute and funny, and yet it managed to be serious at the same time. You've mixed childish charm, wily pick-up techniques, and hurtful colloquialisms all into a one-shot. Excellent, and definitely a favorite.

"And then… we picked up girls."
"You did what?"
"Dora, um, Mummy's not interested…"
"No Sweetie, Mummy is very interested to hear about that."

Aww, I loved this. So sweet! And I liked the ending, the way Andromeda remembers and there's a serious scene, but then you difuse the tension with a joke at the end. So well written.
Well done!
-Halo

:) absolutly wonderful

*shakes head*
lol
Sirius
XP

this is a really nicely done fic. i loved it! and i like how you chose to end it on a humorous note. good job ;D

HAHAHA the middle part was halarious
where sirius was using dora to pick up girls lololol xD