 OrchidsAndVines 1/25/12 . chapter 1That's super adorable! Ted is so sweet! And iv never really given their story much thought. It great knowing that there are good authors writing about the not as recognized pairings |
 Mittenzs 12/27/11 . chapter 1Love it. I like the last bit especially, where she reflects on how she used to use the word casually. |
 Diagonally 11/26/11 . chapter 1 :)
This was cute :) |
 lolchika21 3/18/11 . chapter 1that was funny/cute! |
 BlackGryphon101 1/13/11 . chapter 1Great story. |
 HerGoldenWings 12/23/10 . chapter 1I never really had a reason to love Andy and Ted.
but now I do. |
 NyxBorn 10/10/10 . chapter 1What did she call him? |
 SilkenRoseDreams 9/7/10 . chapter 1Ehehehehe... Nice. and I really like this story. Its cute. |
 Lena xo 5/8/10 . chapter 1AWW! Loved the Andromeda/Ted fluff at the end. Nymphadora is of course awesomeness in human form and Sirius using her to pick up girls is classic XD
Love,
Lena xo |
 Loads of Randomness 4/18/10 . chapter 1I love this story! It's really sweet. I love the way Sirius and Andromeda act around each other. I love the way Dora is so innocent. I love the way Andromeda explains things to Dora. Yeah, I love this story.
Favourite lines: "Because when she does something brilliant, she's our daughter. When you have to come up with an explanation for why their neighbor's cat is pink, she's my daughter."
and
"But about your using my only child as your personal matchmaking service..."
and
"Although if you really want to apologize for calling me names, you might apologize for what you called me last week when I let Dora fingerpaint the dining room wall..."
"No, I stand by that."
Keep on writing!
**Loads of Randomness** |
 Expecting Rain 4/4/10 . chapter 1Hmm, I thought the word would be "mudblood"!
I love Sirius using Dora to pick up girls! Hahahahaha.
I like how you point out that Dora has Black eyes right in the middle of the "where did you hear that word" confrontation.
I like the ending, too - "No, I stand by that." :D |
 Mrs.GingerHinkley 7/31/09 . chapter 1Great job! You really captured a four year old witch's dialouge very well. Dora's outing with Sirius was rather amusing. I especially like how you explained Andromeda's reaction; very real and believable. |
 random.illusionz 6/16/09 . chapter 1haha mini dora tonks so cute
loved it ;) |
 Jasminny 6/3/09 . chapter 1haha. such a funny ending to a sirius [hehe] one shot. i like reading this one
shot over and over especially because of these lines: "She just tossed it out so
easily, so naturally. It was like...like..." "Like you used to?" so perfect and right.
and i love sirius using dora to pick up girls. funny:] |
 madbrad 12/19/08 . chapter 1An amusing first two-thirds, but the
"Like you used to?"
brought me up short. Great ending.
(And much more enjoyable than an article on financial planning. :-)) |