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| Youko-Kokuryuuha 2008-10-10 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this was adorably cute and funny, and yet it managed to be serious at the same time. You've mixed childish charm, wily pick-up techniques, and hurtful colloquialisms all into a one-shot. Excellent, and definitely a favorite. |
| HallowedInk 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuse"And then… we picked up girls." "You did what?" "Dora, um, Mummy's not interested…" "No Sweetie, Mummy is very interested to hear about that." Aww, I loved this. So sweet! And I liked the ending, the way Andromeda remembers and there's a serious scene, but then you difuse the tension with a joke at the end. So well written. Well done! -Halo |
| pinecone.girl 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuse:) absolutly wonderful |
| unique.normality 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*shakes head* lol Sirius XP |
| AmazingBouncingFerret445 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusethis is a really nicely done fic. i loved it! and i like how you chose to end it on a humorous note. good job ;D |
| Lilianne-Rachelle 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA the middle part was halarious where sirius was using dora to pick up girls lololol xD |
| Avindara Nirvene 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI love this! It's humourous and serious at the same time ;) Wonderful ending. |
| laya.in.the.sun 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThe relationships Andromeda has with Ted and her daughter are so sweet here. |
| Sir Stud Muffin 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusehahahaha! now that was a fantastic read! bloody brilliant if you ask me! i especially loved sirius and that last "no, i stand by that" line |
| Demoiselle Kyota 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseAww! It was bittersweet; the Sirius thing was really funny, but the Mudblood thing was so sad! Little Dora was so cute! ~ Kyota |
| equal-opportunity-candy-eat... 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was so funny! I was laughing hysterically when Dora told Andromeda about Sirius' match-making service! |
| Princess Gillybean 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseamazing writing. i loved it |
| Nadiya Iman Lestrange 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, this is lovely - I found myself tickled pink at the idea of Sirius taking a little Tonks to Diagon Alley, especially since she wouldn't clearly remember such a thing when she met up with him again almost twenty years later and I can simply imagine the pair of them getting into all kinds of things together. I also find the acknowledgement of Andy's past as a scion of the House of Black a beautiful thing as well. Excellent fic! |
| arctique48 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuse"Indeed, the concept that actions might have consequences had always been something Sirius had trouble grasping". Ah, so much love. Sirius is genius, the whole 'picking up girls' bit was brilliant :D "Because when she does something brilliant, she's our daughter. When you have to come up with an explanation for why their neighbor's cat is pink, she's my daughter." Lol, my parents do exactly that with my little brothers :P That really made me smile. Anyhoo, lovely little story with a lovely little moral. Much loveliness. Well done! |
| Glorious Clio 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseYet another excellent fic!! I am very impressed with this story- I loved the humor, but also the overshadowing of the war. Great job! |