Good, just could have used more details.

it was short and everyone was ooc... this wasn't very good.. no offense...

um... this stinks.

this was pretty bad. there was no nothing! luna was ooc, and the cure to the curse thing made no sense whatsoever. and luna saying out loud to the cure to the curse thing... wtf?

and what on earth were you going on about the love between everybody?

"I love you, too, Luna. Now, come on. Let’s go help Harry with the Death Eaters.” this was an amazingly unrealstic line. everyone is ooc!

great story
(m cookies)