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| Sepik 2006-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseA few grammar mistakes here and there, but it was good overall. |
| Olivia Sutton 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was really really good. Short and sweet-- and I love the McKay/Sheppard pairing. Why is the ENTIRE story centered though? It should be flush left-- it's a bit hard to read centered. Anyway-- good story. --Olivia Sutton |
| Shakia 2006-09-05 ch 1, | abuseWHA! Poor McKay! Yeek, this was so totally cool ._. Can't wait for an update! |
| Hettie 2006-08-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, very well written. Update soon, please? Thanks for sharing. |
| Jack-rocks 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseSo sad but so beautiful. It hurts to see Rodney so desperate. Please continue. |
| Batman'sBeauty18 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseNice beginning, my only complaint is that the way you have the story centered makes it slightly hard to read. Can't wait for the update! |
| nwfairy 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abusePretty... and sad... |