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| Canju 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt rocked my sox. =) |
| Sasori no Danna 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe art stuff was awesome. I wish there wass more Sasori (or hints of SasoDei), but I totally loved how you portrayed Deidara. Esp. the family stuff. |
| Rascal 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was great. I loved the line "You taste like an ash-tray" lol. |
| 8999 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseWin or fail? 100% WIN! Write more. plz? |
| Yahooze 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love how smart Itachi is!! |
| Jashin29 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was fantastic! I LOVED the beginning. I loved all of it actually, but it was so great. You should write a sequel. XD |
| KrackKlouny 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love all the art and perception talk. And the beginning quote. |
| Ken-chan 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseSuper amazing! XD You should write more ItaDei. |
| IDnet 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseItachixDeidara AU fic FTW! |
| Kikyou 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved how introspective the entire piece was. XD |
| Tomoyo 2008-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a very nicely written story. I really, really liked it. |
| Lifehouse32 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was seriously fantastic. You are SUCH an amazing writer (esp. since you actually know the proper usage of quotes and other such things that many-too many- writers don't grasp). I seriously love this! I wish it wasn't only a one-shot though. But I LOVE it! ;) |
| KungFuu 2007-02-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was a beautiful piece of writing. I forgot whether I was looking at a painting or reading a story. Masterful. |
| Insomniac Owl 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuse(Art is about experimentation, new things, forcing people to wake up from their dreary lives and look at what’s around them.) Your themes carry through your works, from this to Cityscape Asleep, from Deity (this my favorite out of everything on it's wonderful and beautiful and amazing and I love it to death) to a few others... And you know, it never gets boring. That's a tribute to your talent my friend. That's saying something. And something else? Even though we've never met, it seems like you've become my best online friend. Weird, since it's all contact through our stories (but how better to get to know a person, right? Because our writing is our soul), but that's how I think it is. Anyway. I liked this. Like I said earlier, your themes carry. It's nice. Have you started any original works you might publish? Keep us updated, please please please. I would kill to get my hands on your first book. YOur writing is beautiful. Like poetry, and oh-so powerful. Love always. |
| Addie777 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. I loved the conversation with Itachi and Deidara. It was so deep and introspective . . . : ) masochistic enough (and they’re all art students, so that’s saying something) I found that part strangly hilarious! : D Good job! You did a great job. As expected from my favorite writer. ; ) |