Wow...that was really good. Interesting plot/idea and I love how you used the characters. That was sexy kiss :D
Excellent job!

definitely made me think. i'm not sure if i liked itachi in this fic or not.

thanks for sharing.

It rocked my sox. =)

The art stuff was awesome. I wish there wass more Sasori (or hints of SasoDei), but I totally loved how you portrayed Deidara. Esp. the family stuff.

It was great. I loved the line "You taste like an ash-tray" lol.

Win or fail?

100% WIN! Write more. plz?

I love how smart Itachi is!!

It was fantastic! I LOVED the beginning. I loved all of it actually, but it was so great. You should write a sequel. XD

I love all the art and perception talk. And the beginning quote.

Super amazing! XD You should write more ItaDei.

ItachixDeidara AU fic FTW!

I loved how introspective the entire piece was. XD

It's a very nicely written story. I really, really liked it.

Wow, that was seriously fantastic. You are SUCH an amazing writer (esp. since you actually know the proper usage of quotes and other such things that many-too many- writers don't grasp). I seriously love this! I wish it wasn't only a one-shot though. But I LOVE it! ;)

This was a beautiful piece of writing. I forgot whether I was looking at a painting or reading a story. Masterful.