   hitomi-chan 7/6/03 . chapter 16hi there,
i had this idea for looking at the older fics in the R section...and i stumbled across yours. and i must say, its very good. in fact, i love it so much that its now going to my favorites! really.
i love the way how you have been creative. and the fluffy moments with van and hitomi. they are so sweet, i loved it. and the baby, ah! that must be the cutestes thing, ever!
im really glad merle found someone to show her effections and have them returned, van is finally freed from her overly protective manner, well, almost n_n; its hitomis turn to do that. not that she minds anyway...
and can i say how much i hate the wako dornkirk son dude? yeah, he is really getting on my nerves. so what his wife died? so what he wants his daugther to marry van? he is sick. really. killing a woman and her son to have his way is sick. not only will he kill hitmom and her baby, he will kill van mentally. and even if van wants...he will never love his daughter.
never.
and thats another thing. dont you want your daughter to be happy apart from having the most powerful ruler as a husband? i mean, she loves him, thats fine. but van doesnt love her, and wont be able to make her happy. so...in the end, her father only THINKS what is gonna make her happy. he is just a jerk, a complete jerk. and lets not forget sick _
i have noticed that this fic hasnt been up-dated for a very, very long time. almost 2 years. its sad that this has never been finished. like i said before, i really like, no, LOVE this fic. so ill have to use my imagination to finish it, if you dont ever up-date again.
you must be very busy, and im sorry. i am busy too. i havent writen for a long time, and im shameful for that. i try not to take so long...but the summer vacation is so good_;;
if you ever want to continue this fic, please do. i would be very happy. and if you dont, thats okay too. your life is more important, including the people in it. writing is just a hobby, not your life. never forget that n_n
and if you ever want to talk to me, which i would simply love. oh, do you have msn? if you do...than i would love to chat with you! its: dont worry, i dont bite_ *cough, cough*
i hope that with this review i have helped you somehow. it would be a real shame if you never finish this fic, but no pressure if you decide never to continue it. well, i think i have broken my record in writng long review n_n;; i think...
but anyway, enjoy life, never stop smiling and be happy! and to let you know you have a real talent in writing, never give up!
lots of hugs from your fellow reader *and fan*,
hitomi-chan-ps-and your fic has very funny bits. they are so funny! and the other chareacters i dont know, but they are still awesome! bye! *waves* |
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