A great story. Very good.

That was wonderful, and you write beautifully! I'm so glad Susan was able to see the truth.

This is GREAT- I'm SO glad you're a Christian- and an 'unabashed Christian' at that! Keep up the good work!

WONDERFUL!

OH THat was Awesome. I am glad you are a christian, so am I. Please check out some of my stories. I don't have a narnia one yet, but I am planningonhaving one

Hey, I really enjoyed this fanfiction and I especially love Narnia. I'm not sure if this has been pointed out yet and I don't want to seem picky, but Aunt Alberta and Uncle Harold don't go to church. They think it a waste of time and are that lost.

This was just a note. Other than that I loved your story and I am glad you wrote it about what the Chronicles of Narnia actually means. No, what Aslan did was not just an allegory. *big smiles and gives cookie*

I agree with you. The sequence, if I can call it that, is too similar for Lewis not to have thought about Jesus' crucification, even if it wasn't written exactly as an allegory.

I felt so bad for Susan here - I always did, even though I disliked her when I had read the two last books for her ignorance, because she seems so lonely all the time. She was simply not as sure of Narnia as her siblings were. What I wonder now is if Susan stayed in *this* world after her realisation, or if she kind of popped over to "Real" Narnia, where the others were at the time? ^^

Aimael

I am totally Christian too. That's, I think, definitely a part of why I think that the Chronicles of Narnia, LWW, is so great. I loved the way you wrote it. It was perfect. Great job. And I admire how unashamed you are. :) Thanks.
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A beautiful story, with great treatment for Susan.

Thank you, not only for your genuine belief, but for being unafraid to declare to whom your heart belongs. Not only are you a good portrait of what a Christian ought to be, but God seems to have blessed you with great talent.

I hope you keep writing. God Bless.

this story was wonderful! I am so glad that Susan finally knew the truth. I believe to that C.S. Lewis was trying to symbolize the Stone Table as the cross. And Aslan's death, is like the cruxification of Jesus. I love this story, Thalion King's Duaghter! I love it becuase that is what i believe. I believe that Jesus Christ dies for us, piad the ultamite sacrafice. But he rose from the dead and saved us rrom our sins. It reminded me of that verse that says: "For God so loved the world, that He gave His one and only Son. That whoever believes in Him shall not perish, But have everlasting life." John 3:16

I completely agree about Aslan being a picture of Christ. I always wanted to find out if the Pevensies ever discovered Aslan's Earth name, and I appreciate the beautiful simplicity with which you described Susan's belated realization. Thank you for posting this story, and for not backing down or holding back about your beliefs.

Long Live Aslan! From a fellow Daughter of Eve, and sister in Christ!

A tid bit of information to encourage you:
Lewis did not intend at the beginning of his writing to make LLW into an allegory, but he confessed later that amid the process, that was exactly what it had become. And he extended it further. Edmond is everyman, for we are all sinners and traitors at heart in need of a savior. Lucy is John, the disciple Jesus loved. Peter is Peter, the rock of the church, and leader among the 12. Susan was meant to be James, completing the three, but that was before Lewis saw her character and denial after Caspian.

Do not think that you are in any way out of bounds, no matter what others might tell you. Stay strong in the faith, and may the Great Lion of Judah bless your path.

Wow, this of course made me tear up. When I first read The Last Battle years ago, I've always wanted to read another chapter or book about how Susan DID believe. Thanks for writing what I've been searching for, bringing an end to a series.

JESUS IS AWESOME!

Rolletti

Hola, I loved the phrase "unabashedly Christian" made me laugh. Also if you like Narnia then you should read the Circle Trilogy it is one of the best Christian series I have read.

May God bless you!

More power to you my Christian sibling