This was a great story. It was great that you explored Herc's character. I like that Alexia had something to teach Herc this time. I am quite curious about the goose fat incident and other pranks Alexia and Lilith have played on the boys.

Hmm, a nice addition to the Alexia adventures. I really like the friendship element. I think, though, that I would like to see some more stuff about that mysterious herb, such as it being used as a weapon of somesort, and possibly why Cheiron has possession of it-has a lot of possibilities. Good work, my friend.

HiddenValor

i agree with you, i like this one too. leaves you wanting more, even though i know it has come to an end.

i like your use of imagery. nice one! write more!