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sasutard
2008-07-25
ch 11,
abuseomg! this is such an awesome story!! and so original too! :D
i lurve it! please update soon!
CramoisiXRougeXButterfly
2008-07-24
ch 11,
abuseThis story is amazing, please update as soon as possible! I need to know what happens next!
Nostalgic Beauty
2008-07-23
ch 11,
abuseGrr I hate cliffhangers! PLEASE update soon. Your story is very well written, and you know we all love a possessive Uchiha!

Please update!

-NB
YuKiOnA-Ga
2008-07-22
ch 11,
abuseYOU INDEED ARE EVIL! Whats so important? What is he trying to hide? Why did he buy her? Why am i asking so many questions? Why won't you ever update fast enough?(That would be speed of light)Will we ever know the truth? WILL WE?
Otakugal
2008-07-21
ch 11,
abuseupdate ASAP!
CagedHeart
2008-07-21
ch 11,
abusedamn, your spinning magic with this story. pure total magic. it's FREAKIN' AWESOME! and how could you cliff it right there, either they're going to talk about or they're going to do something unmentionable. but if the secret is that secret, i can only wonder what you have in store for this. AMAZING, absolutely. UPDATE! YEAH!
mudheart
2008-07-20
ch 11, anon.
abuseThis story is Awesome!! Update as soon as you can please!!
kiuna'yukina
2008-07-20
ch 11,
abuseNo~! Cliffhanger!

I love this story... Hope you update soon!

Quivering in anticipation,
kiuna'yukina
AD Starr
2008-07-19
ch 11,
abuseOMG! This story is AWESOME! Please hurry up and update, I beg of you! Please don't leave me hanging here; I've GOT to hear what happens next! Pleze!? *Puppy eyes* (No Pressure) LOL Keep up the good work. :)
Lu.tasha
2008-07-19
ch 11,
abuseUpdate soon, or I may just have to cause bodily harm via computer.


Very good story, btw.
Shanny Chan
2008-07-18
ch 11,
abuseHaha, cliffhangers are so bothersome, but they make the next chapter more exciting to face ^^ This has been an awesome story so far, I love the mission plots and everyones personalities, and I'm sure you have an amazing explanation about her being his 'slave' XD

Though I do get the feeling that she's being saved too much, it would be cool to see her get the better of the guys some time. But it's your story, not mine, and I'll love it all the same.
Syaria
2008-07-17
ch 11,
abuseM this story is great (as is this chapter). It has one of the most original plots I've ever found in a Naruto fanfiction story, and when I find a story like this it's always great because it makes digging through the endless piles of crappily written arse gravy on this website worth it.

Also, I have a penchant for fluff, and you write some nice bits of fluff which are not too fluffy, but just fluffy enough to be perfect. Oh and perfect grammar spelling etc etc all the way through as usual :]
Maximum Potter
2008-07-14
ch 11,
abuseThe dreaded cliffhanger strikes again! I too hope that it doesn't take two months, I'm dying to know why he bought her. I love this fic and I'm so excited for what happens next.
inuchan
2008-07-14
ch 11, anon.
abuseI love the chappie ^^ pwease update soon
Maximum Potter
2008-07-13
ch 10,
abuseOkay so I'm just looking around for a great Naruto fic to maybe inspire me and also it's about midnight, but I click on this one because I was at first appaled by the idea of men owning women, then I was drawn by mere curiosity. I began reading and found that I couldn't stop. A. the titles are awesome! I agree with what you said earlier on how we have to keep classic Disney songs alive and not have "pop-stars" butcher them! B. I'm loving your plot and can't wait to see what happens next! You're doing a great job with this fic.
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