 DementedLeaf 5/21/07 . chapter 3Ok, I have this annoying habit of reading whatever's already up before reviewing, but at least I'm bothering, eh? :-P
First, then - the premise. It's interesting. I don't think it'd ever actually happen as all the cadets I've ever seen have been scarily fit and healthy and perfectly in control of everything, but I think this could be a rather interesting idea to work with.
Secondly - I'm impressed by your spelling and grammar. So many fics let themselves down with bad English, I'm glad this isn't one of them.
Lastly - I'm adding this one to my alert list so make sure you keep writing :) |
 Lilith Kayden 5/5/07 . chapter 3This was a very good development of the character of Cadet Meagan McCormick, as well as an expansion in the depth of some of the others. I will eagerly anticipate the forthcoming chapters in this new stroy.
-Lilith Kayden |
 Lilith Kayden 11/1/06 . chapter 2It will definitely be interesting to see how the role of Cadet Meagan McCormick unfolds in this story. It seems to me the author may be implying that there is a hidden Mystery about her. I'm glad they're all on the Starship now, and underway. I'm sure this will prove to be another very good story about the Ability, IF we get semi-regular updates. Keep up the good work! AD ASTRA! (Latin for "to the stars through hardship." Sounds to me like the attitude of the crew of the Starship Ability.)
-Lilith Kayden |
 k9mark4 9/26/06 . chapter 1cool. please continue. i like reading your fics, epsecially the ones about cp. one of my best friends has cp, and i know other people with it. |
 Lilith Kayden 8/29/06 . chapter 1Thank you so much for your new story. I loved "Set a Course for Freedom." It was really inspirational, as a caregiver for a person with Cerebral Palsy and resonated with many experiences in my own life. I was really hoping you'ed write a new Ability story. Now you have. I very much look forward to your updates.
-Lilith Kayden |