It was good. I especially liked the end part...
keep up the good work and write more!

as short as it was it was really good I especially liked the

I part.

Nice story, is it a one-shot? Anyways thanks for the read XD!

AW KAWAII DESU!!

AW! So Kawaii & funny! Great Yuri! Please keep writing.

May Sakura and Tomoyo live in the hearts of others forever!!

aw

that was so sweet! i love it

Oh my gosh why on earth haven't I read this sooner?! It's great! It's just so great!

If she wasn't so drunk I would've wanted to see Konoka flirt with Setsuna some more, but oh well.

Short but sweet.

Keep up the good work!

Ek!So cute!Please write more!

i liked this one it's sweet

It's so cute and sweet good job

*grins* Love the humour. I was totally roaring with laughter at poor Setsuna. :D

Although there were some problems...
Aside from grammatical errors, missing words..and perhaps some spelling mistakes..the beginning was awkward. It started with Setsuna carrying Konoka, but it continued with a flashback without any notice. There seems to be an inconsistency in the timeline, although I know what you meant. Perhaps you could indicate a flashback or rephase your sentences so that they fit nicely with the timeline?
Erm..I'm kinda puzzled.. Although it's sweet and all, was Konoka awake the whole time; just pretending to be asleep/drunk? Or did she wake up some time during the course? It seemed a little abrupt that Konoka was fully awake and sober.. I hope you can clear that issue.

Nevertheless, it was a great read. ^^
You turned me into a mush of KonoSetsu-ness..

Please write more. You really should.

-Aiiro-chan

Cute! Kawwai XD

Very few things to say about this oneshot. It's very well-written, with very few spelling/grammar errors. Your writing style is similar to mine in some aspects, too.

Some small spelling errors, like "exactally" should be spelled "exactly," but they're not a big deal at all.

You write with excruciating detail, which I really like ^.^ . Details make the romance ever more cute XD

Hmm... the second-last paragraph happened a bit abruptly... as if Konoka was awake the whole time. It would have made a bit more sense if she slowly stirred, or something of the like. Besides that small detail, though, the whole fic moved very smoothly.

I loved this piece! You must have some good writing talent. I've gotta read more of your work ^.^ . Hope you have more KonoSetsu! XD

Kudos,
Freedom Kira

OMG O.O
i love it so much ><
do more *begs*
dat was so good >< i was so into the story XD, so cute, love this pairing~

Very cute fic! You should write a longer one next time. I would love to read more Setsuna x Konoka from you. =)

that was cute. i love setsuna/konoka! and i think u mean OOC, not OCC. not u, the guy who commented before me with the weird name.