 Wicked Winter 4/6/10 . chapter 6XD nice.
Loved them all.
Especially the third drabble |
 Lady Mayu 10/22/09 . chapter 5Hey can the younger Edward find out what happens to his future
self and that he becomes a State Alchemist? Wonder what his reaction would be if he found out that his future self is a famous State Alchemist? |
 Lady Mayu 10/13/09 . chapter 6Love the story! Can little Edward and Al watch older Edward having sex with the future Roy out of curiosity without them knowing they're there? That'd be funny. |
 Lord Rebecca-sama 6/13/09 . chapter 6hahahaha that last one was funny XD update soon! i love these things _ |
 Lord Rebecca-sama 6/13/09 . chapter 5i love these shorts. they're really good. |
 Lord Rebecca-sama 6/13/09 . chapter 3hahaha thats funny XD |
 asm613 2/27/09 . chapter 6oh god, this was is to funny. the way your mind works-you're the funniest pervert/author. |
 asm613 2/27/09 . chapter 3it's so funny how you have older ed thinking what a little shit his younger self is |
 Fluff-Mistress-And-Silverwolf 8/11/08 . chapter 6 OWNED! xD |
 Ining-Batong 6/26/08 . chapter 3omg im reading da fic again! heheheehehahahahahahaha |
 Lunadia-aloneforevermore 6/13/08 . chapter 6lol I burst out laughing and scared my girlfriend when I read this one. amazing indeed, I hope you write more soon. An Idea would be maybe older Roy talking to little ed to learn more about ed's childhood, seeing as he rarely speaks of it. a more serious conversation though, where little ed is more perceptive of his older self's, and the generals' feelings. and another idea would be maybe a part of the epilogue where al remembers what older ed told him about not doing anything forbidden. if only you could do a sequel where maybe their visit made a difference in the past, that would be so awesome. hey, if you decide not to do one, could I? there's just so many things you could do with it...and another drabble idea would involve older ed realizing major roy's pain at not being able to help, and telling major roy how much of a difference he has and will make, maybe an encouraging heart to heart type of talk where he gives major roy some hope for the future. and another idea would be trisha overhearing THE talk of love between ed and roy, and realizing exactly how perfect the 2 are for each other. heh, this got really long, but I have loads of ideas. feel free to e-mail me whenever, you're a brilliant writer. I'm off to read descent next, and then prolly the other ones mention in your bio that aren't on ff. - I don't read oneshots as a rule, but I've always had a fondness for long stories.
Lunadia |
 Ining-Batong 3/28/08 . chapter 6Oh mi gosh! wait...put what in where...oh poor Ed |
 Ining-Batong 3/28/08 . chapter 5hahahaha Edward was gonna fall asleep! |
 shogi 12/20/07 . chapter 6OMG that was HILARIOUS! I read Future Memories too and that was a wonderful story as well as a very cool plot line! Great job! These drabbles though... Hahaha! Too funny! Especially the last! |
 Songfic Misstress 11/10/07 . chapter 6Aw. so cute. An innocent Edward that doesn't understand homosexuality... hehehe little does he know what goes on when he grows up. |