lol, this is fun. *sent it to her I-man obsessed friend* tas.

Good basic premise, excellent voice on all the characters. I saw her identity coming, but her target and sponsor caught me wholly by surprise. The scene changes were a little confusing with nothing to set them apart from each other, especially toward the end when they got to be more rapid-fire, but the back-and-forth is a nicely cinematic way to move the story forward. The "psycho secret agent softball league" conversation was *priceless* - sounded just like them. Keep up the good work!

That was dang good. Suspenseful. Imaginative. I totally loved it!

I remember reading this a long time ago on the Quicksilver Archive, I still love it! Keep up the good work. _

Excellent story!

I remember reading this somewhere before. I'm not sure if I reviewed it then, but I will now. Very good story, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.