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| princessebee 2007-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. |
| caylender 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL!! That was so funny! It's totally going on my favorite list! |
| Okami1 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseWhere did those candles come from indeed! *snickers* Poor Leo. I'm assuming this whole thing was a dream. In that case, I wonder what his reaction would have been had Splinter come running in after he'd screamed. *snickers again* Really loved this story, especially the analogies you used. Like the squeak of the door opening sounding like a tumble weed. Great job! ^_^ |
| Anonymous 2006-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was hilarious! I'm surprised that most of the readers didn't understand what happened...Leonardo's candles obviously made him 'high' and he hallucinated the whole thing! ROTFL! |
| MaskedApe25 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseDisturbing to say the least... Jarred Fouche' (Jarred706) |
| Reijiro 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseROFLMAO! Very well done! Goin' on my favs' list. Loved the imagery you used, very graphic. So did Leo get his 'herbal' candles from a dubious street vendor, or did he borrow some of Mikes', lol?! Cheers! |
| BubblyShell22 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was too funny. So was it just a dream or real? And what's that part about the candles? I'm confused there. Great work though. Write another good story soon. You are a good writer. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| Jessiy Landroz 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! and EW! I figured there was going to be a moment of bonding between father and son, but I never, EVER thought it to be anything like THIS! I don't knwo if I should be laughing my head off or scream and chant 'Ew!' for the next half hour! but I gotta admit this was a scream! a funny, halariouse scream!oh poor Leo, in all the darn luck, LOL! now I wonder what the heck did they use to make those candles, *rubs chin thoughtfully* |
| RAPHAELFAN02 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseROTFL Wow I was not expecting this story to come out the way that it did. What Splinter revealed to Leo...I'd probably be screaming my head off too. And then each of the guys reaction... LOL Nice story. Keep up the good work. XD |