"I believe such sugar would be…detrimental to your circulation," Snape dangerously offered.

I absolutely love this line!
Short but clever story! I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

This is lovely. Dark and romantic at the same time ...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

O... Sends shivers down my spine. Very well written. I love Snape's comment at the end of part one and I especially love how you phrased what Hermione and Sev said to each other in part two.

Nice piece of original writing. :)

A great pair. Such really sharp, crisp writing. Love your phrasing in, "...but the intelligence within her blood fails her, for he possesses a heart; one that now beats without hope."
This, and your characterization of Snape, is very poignant.

Clever and sad - but you're confusing some of your readers (to judge from the reviews) because you got the name wrong. Worple's vampiric friend was called Sanguini, not Santini.

amazing!

Um...i don't really understand this story,mind telling me who santini is?i'd really appreciate it if u explain this story,because i really admire your talents.:-)