Wow - that was good, and *le gasp* a poem that DOESN'T rhyme! lol. :D ♥ You should write more for this beautiful play! There is now a section for it under Misc!

Hm...I like this. I think it has some good insight, on the emotion of the piece, and everything. Very good work!

Luv ITW! Nice poem, short but sweet.

This was quite lovely, glad to find another ITW fan!

You should really attempt to continue this...I think it'd be a great story!