I really liked this. Nice job with all of the characters, (except maybe Kim and Chase, they might have been a bit unrealistic)and I enjoyed the writing style.

I'm surprised you've only received one review so far for this fic - it's a good start and I like the way that you're involving the different characters. I look forward to reading a continuation.

o this is good!
Are you going to make this JackChloe?
great start so far, I can't wait to read more!