Reviews for Anime Roomates

Reviews For: Anime Roomates

kitykat556 2007-04-21 ch 4,	abuseThat was a good storie please update
Poison Fairy 2006-09-26 ch 4,	abusebut isn't shin chan some type of stupid american show?
Heart's Door 2006-09-24 ch 4,	abuseHm... Amusing... o.O
Poison Fairy 2006-09-17 ch 1,	abuseis this like that one comedy central show with foxy love, super something, ling lingand betty boop in it?
Heart's Door 2006-09-12 ch 3,	abuse. . . . Erk! o.O Pikachu died... Er... faints But anyway, that was an interesting twist that you put in there. However, you should slow down the story and write about normal things too, like how the characters deal with the other characters' different personalities and powers. And can't Ed and Al just get a piece of wood and turn it into a burger with their alchemy skills or something? o_O Overall, you should add more detail and concentrate more on small events too, not just big events. Write more about what the characters do; the story seems to have more dialogue than action.
Cecile21 2006-09-10 ch 2,	abusecool!! its so funny and the whole hiei and ed fight thing is real good. keep on updating!
Heart's Door 2006-09-05 ch 2,	abuseHa ha. Sakura is pretty amusing. The idea of having all of those characters in the same household as a reality show is pretty funny, but you should add more details. For example, you could describe how the house looks or the expressions on the character's faces. Just because it's supposed to be a reality show doesn't mean it doesn't have to be written creatively like a story. Anyway, write another chapter soon. ^_^ (Preferrably a longer chapter, but it doesn't really matter.)
Pete the Rock 2006-08-30 ch 1,	abuseIt's pretty cool that you have a 5-way parody of "Big Brother" anime style. While you have that TV story, I have an 11-way crossover, with three of the names you have listed. Sorry if I'm bragging. Update ASAP.

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