Hi there. Found your story favorited on someone else's list who was on someone else's list, so your story is a wonderful find through networks. I love finding authors and stories that way. I'm favoriting your story so I don't forget about it. Just a few weeks left until semester lets out and I would love to have a new story to read over the holidays. I'll review properly then. I love this beginning. I understand what you mean about planning a story and loosing interest. I took down ALL of my stories because I lost interst and because I took that very same approach. One day I'll resume.

I hope that you get the final chapters out soon; you have a great story going here. I look forward to reading the finale.

I can't believe that I hadn't found this excellent story before now.

Now, you have me breathless and on the edge of my seat for the conclusion. Can't you just see me biting my nails?

This has been marvelously entertaining. I like what you did with the Labryinth especially. Can't wait to see it finished!

I've just started reading this story and wish I had found it a long time ago. You've mixed together the right amount of the original tale and your own ideas - the glass coffin was truly creepy! I can't wait to discover how Sarah never stood a chance in the Labyrinth, and what is keeping her standing, she must be knackered!!

I've only finished the first chapter, and I like this already! I just found your story this evening, and after seeing the title had to at least look at it. Not only am I already hooked on the story and writing, I'm thrilled to see that the title came from one of my favorite groups. I absolutely adore Nightwish, and it's lovely to see their lyrics used. [Your story is the first I've seen, and I read several fandoms where they'd fit. Is Nightwish that unknown?] 'Sleepwalker' is one of my favorite songs, and I think it fits 'Labyrinth' perfectly. The lines you quoted at the beginning and end--'A place between sleep and awake / End of innocence, unending masquerade'--always made me think of Jareth and Sarah.

I like your treatment of Karen and Sarah's relationship--it's different than in most fics I've read (where they've become good friends). They're not friends here by any means, but Sarah has matured, and understands that even if Karen doesn't quite 'get' her, she still means well.

If I didn't have to get up early tomorrow, I'd be reading through this tonight. As is, I'll pick it up tomorrow after school. Yay, new fic!

[Oddly enough, just as I started this review, 'Sleepwalker' came up on iTunes, which was on shuffle. :)]

I honestly waiting to see how Sarah handles this challange. However she could call him on a technicallity and say that she was only required to get to the castle and therefore had won. How ever mystical tree women in shrouds don't go about giving out prophecies for nothing.

All these chapters have been a lovely read, however I am most anxous to see how the next one turns out.

can't wait for the next chapters!

Ack. How can you leave us there? Can't wait for more.

Hello!!
I love this story, where is the rest of it? More please.

I like this story. I stumbled upon it a day or two ago and have just gotten around to reading it, and I really do like it. There were so many good twists, and you wrote her journey through the labyrinth well. I can't wait to see how this ends, please update soon!

I like the chapter, and of course the big cliff hanger at the end was nice... very different... can't wait to see the next chapter!

This is getting so good. I know I'm a later comer. But I am so happy to see your still updating this story. It's such a work of art it's hard to find stories that capture the essence which is Labyrinth. I can't wait to see what happens next. The story and plot are original. This is such a mind boggling story it continually has me at the edge of my seat and I'm so happy to see it still blooming. Keep it up!

*exhaling* Finally! Thank you.

FINALY! :D