"I won't." Nice.

I loved how tentative Sasuke was being, contrasted with Naruto's brashness. Your imagery is really lovely.

that...was..amazing. woo-hoo!! it was so vivid. i felt like i was stalking them ^_^;

this one is very soft, nostalgic, reminds me of summer when i was sixteen and thinking about boys all the time

Um. WOW. Seriously, your imagery is out of this world. And I like Naruto being the instigator *evil grin*. Excellent

This was seriously really good. It was. I'm glad that there are serious fanfiction writers out there, I wish I could write that well.

Pretty good! Always loved every SasuxNaru you wrote! You got talent! Keep that up!!
-Gonrie

Wow...you're so good. I vaguely remember reading this before, but apparently I neglected to leave a review. Though it wasn't that long, It still took me a while to read, because there was so much to take in. It appealed to all the senses...great job!

I really liked it :x After I've finished writing this I'm going to go search through the rest of your fics and hope you've written more sasunaru. The only line I disliked was this one "Sasuke can’t explain it, how can eyes change color?" Seemed a little ridiculous for _Sasuke_ of all people to say that, considering he has the sharingan and his eyes frequently change colour...

...wow!that was one of the best yaoi fics i've ever read.usually oe of them is totally ooc-ing!!it's really detailed!you made a few spelling mistakes but who really gives a **!!good work!!

you write with a LOT of detail, ya know that? anyway this was very...cute and serious? dignified? whats the word >_

Wow... just, wow. That was incredibly well done, I don't think I have ever read anything as in-character as this, and I read alot. On top of that, the writing was poetic and flowed perfectly, and everything was so descriptive, I could see the entire thing in my mind with a clarity that is... heh, shocking really. Wonderfully written.

o.m.g.

friken amazing, that's all i can say. why can't more people write like this??

Poetic. It just... flows. I'm jealous. >

Wow! Really good fanfic! It was well written and in character ^_^ Off to read more of your fanfic ^_^