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Yumeko the druggie? Say it ain't so! :P

I really liked this chapter. Very well done with Sara, Xania and Rosho (Yume). And the kiss was pretty well pulled off too.

The one thing I'm still questioning is how long before someone recognizes Yumeko, the daughter of Priss and one of the world's best Gymnasts? She's not exactly one to lay low at school either. XP

Well, I don't know if you remember, but when you had this chapter finished, you had problems getting it online...

I actually mailed you to send me that chapter, but I never got to sending you a review...writing like this (noncommercial only for the experience and enjoyment others get from reading) should always be a two-way road...in that way, I failed as a reader and as a reviewer, especially because reviews are very well an authors lifeblood. For this I want to apologize to you (even though I don't know you even remember said event).

So, now that I got your attention, here's my review :D

I really like the story and the way you described the KS and Yumeko maturing over time. It was written in a very believable fashion, if you know what I'm trying to say. As a matter of fact, this story has been one of the most fulfilling reads I've had in a long time, with few "professional" authors able to compete. Your story has had a quality rarely seen in online archives, and it has continued gaining even more with every new chapter you put out. I sincerely hope you'll be able to continue that trend. I also hope you won't give up writing once FTA is finished...that would be a waste of your talents IMHO.

I just realized I spent WAY too much time typing this (especially since I had to delete every sentence at least twice before I got it sounding right), so I better put an end to this review before it gets even longer ;)

Cheers!