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| Akiko-Chan-232 2007-05-04 ch 3, | abuseMaya can talk?? |
| Clayxyinyang 2006-12-09 ch 7, | abuseaw, man! i had a really nice review for ya, but i accidentally got rid of it! i'm so mad! oh, well...nice story. your grammer sucks, though. (no offense) good points and bad, i got confused when you said that omi was on rai's side, though. i like it. you should write some more clayxkims. ttfn! |
| fallonmarie3 2006-09-17 ch 7, | abuseYAY it let me review. I loved this story and I hope there will be other stories. You have done a great job with the story line. starts to cry* but i'm sad this story is over, Keep up the good work |
| fallonmarie3 2006-09-04 ch 3, | abuseI love maya sister also, I hope kimiko does not give up hope on Clay, and i hope she bruns Rai's back side. Great story, I love the way you write all the people. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| fallonmarie3 2006-08-31 ch 2, | abusepoor Clay, I hope he is okay and i hope Maya finds him. and i hope Kimiko uses the new Wu to kick Rai's butt, Great story, just as good as your first, Can't wait fro the next chapter, to see what happens |
| Triple E 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseNice sequel! I hope that Kimiko rejects Raimundo because I don't like him and I'm getting sick of these Kimundo love stories. |
| fallonmarie3 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuse*cries* I love Maya and now she is gone. She kinda reminds of my dog Shi. But i love the fact that Kimiko and clay are together. but i'm also worried about what Rai has going on in his head. I can't wait for the next chapter. |